The Enchanted Pirate Ship
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The Enchanted Pirate Ship

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Summary

The Enchanted Pirate Ship is a story about two friends, their bravery, togetherness. (About me: I am 8 year old boy interested in writing stories in short.)

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

The Enchanted Pirate Ship

The Enchanted Pirate Ship

Written by Vishwa

Once upon a time there lived two friends. Their names are Jake and Peter. The two friends liked to find treasures under the sea. One day when they were finding treasures, they saw an enchanted pirate ship.” Wow!” said Peter,” Look at that”. “Yeah”, said Jake,” let’s explore it”.” Of course,” said Peter. Then let’s go! Said Jake. Then they went in. Then Peter said I don’t think this is a good idea because what if there where ghosts. Nah, then are you a scary cat? said Jake. No but what if there were real ghosts said Peter. There are no ghosts said, Jake. Ok. While they were exploring, they saw something shining. Guess what. they found a big treasure. Yay! Said the both of them. Ok now we can go back to the surface. They had a good life.

The end!

Let Vishwa_Murali know what you thought about this chapter!

nasani
nasani

very intresting story👌👌

4 years
1
Sathya
Sathya

Good one 👏👏👏

4 years
1
Rathna
Rathna

congratulations our special young writer.

4 years

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