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The Enchanted Pirate Ship

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The Enchanted Pirate Ship is a story about two friends, their bravery, togetherness. (About me: I am 8 year old boy interested in writing stories in short.)

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13+

The Enchanted Pirate Ship

The Enchanted Pirate Ship

Written by Vishwa

Once upon a time there lived two friends. Their names are Jake and Peter. The two friends liked to find treasures under the sea. One day when they were finding treasures, they saw an enchanted pirate ship.” Wow!” said Peter,” Look at that”. “Yeah”, said Jake,” let’s explore it”.” Of course,” said Peter. Then let’s go! Said Jake. Then they went in. Then Peter said I don’t think this is a good idea because what if there where ghosts. Nah, then are you a scary cat? said Jake. No but what if there were real ghosts said Peter. There are no ghosts said, Jake. Ok. While they were exploring, they saw something shining. Guess what. they found a big treasure. Yay! Said the both of them. Ok now we can go back to the surface. They had a good life.

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very intresting story👌👌

4 years
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Good one 👏👏👏

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congratulations our special young writer.

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