What I liked about the novel. (I feel so bad for u)

"Hello. I hope life is treating u well. Ur novel was amazing. I am so sorry that u have to go through all that. Anyway this is what I liked and disliked about ur novel. I liked the description. It is very clean. What I disliked was was the placement of the punctuation. It was hard to read but overall it was amazing. I would share this to my brother. I gave the rating that because it was a little sloppy but overall well done. I hope u have a great day/night. Bye :)"