Inkitt
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My mafia president

"Good read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Review

"Very good story line a bit too much SA "

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Mafias president

"Why do I get the feeling raven is going to mess up"

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Mafi President

"Good story. Had bikers as part of the story line. Have a different vision of bikers."

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It was good

"It was good "

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Raven

"I'm loving the book"

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My Mafia President

"I love this story and can't wait to read more chapters! Please update soon. "

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A Grest Read

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The Mafia President

"Just wanted you to know chapter 13 is the same as chapter 12 but it has 2 small paragraphs that are different."

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More

"Need more to this story. Please"

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Sophomoric

"Sophomoric. Choppy, uninspired, confusing writing. No character introduction or development. It was painful to try to read past the first few sentences"

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