My Review

"Honestly, the story could've been told better, and there is a typo in one of the chapters (The typo is the name of the mafia). The story was kind of boring, but I feel it could've been better had you provided more details about the murders, a brief overview on the tragic love story (at least on the day she died), and how Hourglass had slowly become a ruthless monster. I liked the way you write though, it's pretty good! It's well written (the voice of the character), but is missing some details. Thanks for sharing your story :) "