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In my opinion
"It's a very good story. I love when everyone is trying to get to the end of one story another story pops up. The concept of the story is sooooo good . Keep going and write more."
Great Start
"I loved the start of the story! Dives into the start of the plot and action pretty soon, which I liked. The grammar could use a little work (paragraph indents and spelling mistakes) but doesn’t take away from the story. Definitely worth a read!"