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Amazing

"I really enjoyed this book and love Beth. What an awesome person she is. A very well written story in which I had no clue there’s a lot of truth in. It provided hours I was able to focus on something other than my thoughts. So thank you for sharing your story. May you continue to be blessed in life. 💞"

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"Although it's heartbreaking, and horrifying, I'm still grateful to this writer for providing insight into the thought processes of abuse victims. Having known someone who lived a shadow life at the hands of an abusive spouse, I have wondered so often if there was anything I could have done. I still don't have an answer, but I understand the thought processes of the victims a little better, and I'm grateful to the author."

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"I loved every single chapter, honestly great job. I've been in a toxic relationship before, so i could really relate with Elizabeth and the struggles with Candice Great work of art. "

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"I thought the book was absolutely wonderful and it shocks me to hear that it is heavily based on a true story. Were you two really named after Little Women characters?? I think you should publish it on Wattpad, Sofanovel, Tablo, etcetra etcetra. It would give the book well - deserved reach and help you sign quite a few contracts, similar to what I did. A small tip, though : My personal opinion is that your book has SO much more potential and the tiny prologue doesn't exactly sum everything up. If you do have the idea of republishing on other platforms, do not change the prologue, but make it a bit more longer than original. Other than that, I feel like you've done a great job writing despite the fact that it must have been hard for you to relive those sorrowful times while typing each chapter. It's not easy telling the world some of your biggest mistakes and regrets, but I feel that it hasn't gone to waste. I, myself, have gained an understanding of the extent of cruelty that one might give, in the name of suicide. I hope you continue to write more, even if they're not about your own life, for I will be looking forward to reading more from you. "

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Realistic

"Wow!! Such a real one... felt like someone close to me was narrating. And I agree with you and proud to be reading your book. Keep it up 👍🏻 "

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"Rollercoaster of emotions throughout this book but an absolutely amazing book 💖💖💖"

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"I kind of realized that the opening chapters were somewhat experienced. I don't think anyone could have given a word-by-word description of the aftermath of a major loss in a better way unless you've experienced it yourself. I felt so engrossed in a story after a really really long time. The way you described the aftermath of death was the best part of the story. And I feel sorry for your loss."

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"Wonderful book;got me crying "

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"It's a nice read. Worth the time"

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"It just teaches about life I guess..."

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