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Amazing

"It’s a heartfelt story that shows young love"

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Great start

"Off to a great start. Captivating and fast paced. The charters are instantly likable and relatable. Interesting storyline. Looking forward to how the rest of the story unfolds. "

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Accurate

"Your story is a flawless novel, endorsed with literary words and twist, you'd make a great author. Keep writing."

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Good Start

"At this time, there are only 4 chapters for me to read and review, so I'm not able to give the story as a whole the proper review it deserves. However, based upon the first few chapters, I can say that this story is rather interesting. Based on what I can tell, it's basically a "lovers reunited" tale told over the span of 48 hours when the two main characters are locked in a building together and can't escape each other or their unresolved feelings. It's an interesting story concept, especially considering that most romances are told from the beginning, while this one seems to start somewhere in the middle with the conflict between characters already present. I would be interested to see how the story continues to develop from here and how the characters resolve the conflict that has kept them separated until now."

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really pulls me in

"the characters feel like real people, and the situation really pulls me in. I hope you can continue it."

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