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I love the plot and.... everything!

"This story is just perfect! I love the plot! I really like this story, because I am an introvert too and I get a lot of statements like "You don't talk much" or "you are not funny". But, I just wanted to let them know that introverts are normal just like extroverts! This story feels just like my life. The grammar, writing style, punctuation, all of it is amazing! I really enjoyed reading it! Kudos to the author! Loved the plot!"

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Amazing

"This is amazing. Especially the details, it's well written. The plot is really good and interesting. Hope more in the future! "

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Unique

"As far as I read, the plot or the idea is unique, something different and the purpose is clear. We should respect Introverts. Your summary, though a petty thing to notice but even that was so absorbingly touching. It's very fun and positive, a nice life most of us have. Though, you kept one characteristic of Emma very one of the kind. I never thought about it but, it's your, the author's vivid imagination. I don't know how do you even do this, impressed me to core of my heart."

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Special

"Hey! I really enjoyed this book! 😆 Your book teaches a lot about introverts. How they're all human too and that they shouldn't be treated differently. There is nothing wrong about being an introvert. I really enjoyed that book and it was easy to follow. Nice work! 😃💙"

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Emma's Too Connective

"Emma her emotions, her thoughts, and her overall personality of being an introvert, are something I think a lot of readers and myself can connect with on such deep levels. The way the author was able to grasp and hold onto my attention with the strong and assertive use of figurative language was breathtaking. Reading this, I was able to not only flow with the words, but the words were so strong and heartfelt, it was almost captivating me in a poetical state of mind. In the text, Emma says something that I feel resonated well with me and had a strong impact, "Toxic society's use of words that shatters the soul for a moment, but hope regains again, and again". Beautifully said and beautifully well written, being able to show the perspective of how society is crippled, and the convolution one feels when living in the world of today. People in this world should be aware that society's views are not a rising topic, but a biased and prejudiced way that the world has formed around, burying any evidence of what was, of the constant manipulation and threat of living in a world where society has wounded those weak and strong of heart. The very living souls in our bodies are being crushed under the weight of simply the society we have built. The author is able to show that just through the thought process of a young girl named Emma. I am infatuated with how Emma views connections with others and things in general. "The chemistry of nature, the chemistry between her and the selfish conquering world. There must be a connection, a bonding such as when elements are bonded to form a compound". Emma is able to relate the unbearable pain many experiences in the world and applying it to the concept of a "connection". I've never thought of a connection being as such, but this book opens a broader perspective on the mind of a teenage girl who is simply in tune with how her emotions function and how the world is in tune with them. Although that was simply gathered from the first page, it doesn't show up as much as on the second page of the book. However, being a new author I encourage you to keep writing pieces with strong figurative language and the awe you leave many in. I would also add that you continue on with the same powerful and bold emotions you had within the first part of the book. In the end, I would like to thank the reader for taking the time to write this and being able to try new things from their past books. Thank you, you did an excellent job, and I encourage you to keep spreading your creativity :)"

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Awesome

"I love it the way you channel the character is mind blowing I have no words but to say it's well written I love it "

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