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A review from me
"This story overall was fine. It was well thought out. However, the writing style needs some work, I think; it seemed very choppy and whatnot. I was often confused in parts of the story due to the formatting. However, that may just be due to the transfer between different programs. The issue was just that it was confusing to read, I think it would be better with a more concise switch. Like tell when the pov will switch. My only issue with this book is the format. everything i have said has to do with format. If the format was switched, I think this would be a way better story to read and be overall less confusing. This is a nice quick read. "
Authors rating
"I an rating my own story. I just wanted a feel of rating my own story "
