What is your opinion?
Great Description and Emotive language
"The book was almost like a film, I could feel and see everything, just because it was beautifully written, it's clear the writer knew what they were doing and thought about the intended reaction of the audience. The only reason the plot has 4 stars is because the story was short and I thought or at least HOPED it could last longer. WELL DONE!"
The narrative was beautifully balanced, seamlessly blending moments of heartwarming tenderness with exhilarating twists and turns.
"I recently enjoyed immersing myself in a captivating story that left me spellbound. Titled The Twist, this literary masterpiece effortlessly transports readers to a world of beauty and wonder. One aspect that truly mesmerized me was the story's beautiful visuals. The author's meticulous attention to detail painted vivid pictures in my mind, allowing me to savor every scene as if I were watching it on a grand cinematic theater screen. From the bustling streets of an ancient city to the serene landscapes of a forgotten paradise, the backdrop was nothing short of stunning. The author's astonishing ability to describe every element in such a vivid manner sets this story apart. The carefully chosen words effortlessly evoke all five senses, allowing readers to not only visualize the setting but also to hear, taste, smell, and feel its essence. It truly captured the essence of a visual feast for the mind. As I turned each page, I immersed myself entirely in this tale. The author's skillful storytelling took me on a remarkable journey, one that I was reluctant to leave behind. The narrative was beautifully balanced, seamlessly blending moments of heartwarming tenderness with exhilarating twists and turns. Overall, The Twist is an enthralling piece that will undoubtedly leave readers yearning for more. With its breathtaking visuals and engaging narrative, this story is a treat for anyone who dreams of being transported to a cinematic theater in their minds."
Great Imagery
"I enjoyed how the words really seemed to make everything come to life, from children playing to rain pouring down. Great message over all!"
Inspiring children’s book
"I would recommend this lovely little piece to everyone with a passion for writing children’s books. The idea, the imagery and the language used in it are all really impressive. Definitely worth your time"
The Twist
"Everyone should read this book! It's so great! The Twist got me laughing at the end.... "
The Twist
"What an intense creation! It's a great tale. And I can see here that you are a Verse Novelist. Keep making them. You got readers awaiting your creation. Sincerely!"
Twist
"Endearing novel with good flavor of twisted surprises and laughs. Enjoyed it, SOMA. "
TWIST
"Praise I received, “Many writers are successful at expressing what’s in their hearts or articulating a particular point of view. Somvanshiya’s books do both and more” I'm so happy, and felt appreciated for such a wonderful feedback! Notes to the future readers. Sincerely, Somvanshiya ❣️ "
Unexpected Twist!
"I loved describing of rain in every way! I felt it like I was under it! Not spoiling the twist I learned a few things for the future!"
Somvanshiya's Twist
"Nov.30/2023 - A 3 chapter tale of a woman narrating a story to children about a boy, Cou Cou The first chapter poetically details experiences of rainy days. Introduced to three characters they are rushed together in the last chapter. Leaving off without returning to the original narrator & children.I wondered why? Keep up the good work "
