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Great intro
"Terrifying start (in a good way). Nice flow of words with vivid descriptions evoking strong emotions. Great job."
the twist
"i can feel the twists coming and can't wait"
"Terrifying start (in a good way). Nice flow of words with vivid descriptions evoking strong emotions. Great job."
"i can feel the twists coming and can't wait"