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Emotional binge worthy read

"10* I don't know where to start. The book is one emotional beautifully written, rollercoaster. Filled with so much love between Mia and Dante, and the sorrow towards the end part of the book. The ending had me in tears, sobbing for his happiness yet also for his loss. Dante is your alpha, Obsessive boyfriend, a man dedicated to his new life and to Mia. The mafia undertones are written brilliantly, the profound understanding is cast in every word. Truly incredible writing by the author. It's meticulously written with such breathtaking moments. This one will be hard to ever forget xx "

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READ THIS

"I loved this book it was heart warming, heart wrenching and ends on being hopeful for whatโ€™s to come. Although I think Dante was an idiot with his decision I understand his reasons. I was hoping for an Earlier reunion but I see in his own way he was still a part of their life. I hope you continue this story in a series. Would definitely read. Thank you for sharing your talents. "

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Echoes of us

"Loved this book, ending made me cry but it was worth the read . I'm glad he could reconnect with his daughter in the end "

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Echos of Us

"This was a lovely book, loved the pictures. Loved Danteโ€™s and Miaโ€™s love story. It was sad but the ending was a happy one๐Ÿ’—"

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Echo of Us

"I really enjoyed this story. Was wondering how tied in with first bok but then got to that part. Am reading third book of set."

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Loved it

"It was an amazing storyโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ"

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It was good

"It was a good story"

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Beautifully Written

"A beautiful and sad love story. Thank you for sharing your work with us. "

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Great story

"A great story indeed! Not the type usually available. I don't actually like mafia stories, but I read it through and through. Why? Because I really like the way you write. Because I like your plot twists and the way you build your plots. Because I love the characters you come up with! The 1st book I started reading is your last, still ongoing. And I made my way back to your 1st one because I really, really, really like and admire you as an author! Keep updating the chapters and start thinking about a lot more stories ASAP, please! We all need more! And again, thank you so much for your words!!๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’"

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Intense

"Intense mafia romance story with a twist of erotica "

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Loved the story

"Beautifully written even though the ending was sad the story was very good. Thank you for the 2 epilogues and ending it that way. "

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Enjoying the book

"Great read & interesting too"

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Bittersweet

"This book broke my heart. It was beautiful until it was sad. Boy did I cry. "

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Consumed by The Past

"Ohhh I loved this Book reading Mia and Dante's journey and all they went through has given me smiles, tears and a range of emotions. So happy that Dante has been given redemption and will know joy and happiness going forward. Now that this draws to and end it will have me wonder how things go from here.. This has been a brilliant story. I hope that there's many people who read this collection going forward. Brilliant, with many twist and turns, heartfelt moments, a love story from start to finish๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’”โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿฉน๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘€โœ๏ธ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿผโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ๐Ÿช๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธ๐ŸŽฃ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‡ฆ๐Ÿ‡บ"

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Consumed by the past

"Long story in the telling of Danteโ€™s life. Not page wise. It went fast, but covered most of his life growing up, moving to America, becoming a hot young stud, and then his love makes it back to him from Italy. Loved their love story until he sent her and his daughter away. Was hoping he would get back together with her before she was dying. So glad he got to meet his daughter, her baby and husband and start a new life with them. Very good story. One of the best Iโ€™ve read on Inkittโ€ผ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ "

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A hot spicy read

"Dante is an interesting MC. He has a bit of bad to him but a bit of good. Heโ€™s a gentleman than heโ€™s not. He knows how to play it both ways. I think we all inherently crave for a man who can do BOTH! I loved it - between the writing style, descriptions, characters, and spice, I really enjoyed reading this book. The author is incredible!"

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CONSUMED by The Past

"I'm absolutely loving this book so far! It's truly one of a kind, unlike anything I've read before. The story offers a perfect mix of mafia and cop drama, suspense, spicy scenes, and emotional moments. The author's writing is fantastic as always, and the grammar is spot-on. I'm eager to dive deeper into this story to see how Dantรฉ's future unfolds. Amazing work so far, author๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ "

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