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Such a cute (though awkward) date!

"The coupling of the Commander and Lady Unicorn is so cute! Their relationship is quite adorable despite the awkwardness and pressure that the Commander might feel to impress Lady Unicorn and make a good impression. The Commander got major points for pulling it off even though there was a third-wheel with them on the date. And I didn't realize at first but I didn't I did as I got towards the end — they are both female? The description is also engrossing, especially when they are having the picnic and viewing the sky — really lovely descriptions of that! Nice short tale of two characters"

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