What is your opinion?
Good read
"This book has a good plot. It's worth reading. "
Enjoyed
"So far seems like a well written story really enjoying it "
Enthralling
"Please keep up your good work. I am enjoying reading this story and seeing how all the characters are developing. Please let there be a happy ending for Edric. Is Harley a villainous bitch who is planning something very nasty to happen to Iris."
Intriguing
"Can't wait to read more."
Hmm…
"I’m not sure what to think, but I’m really enjoying it. It seems like Harley is up to something though. Can’t wait to read more. "
T A
"Enjoying reading so far. Hopefully more chapters come soon. Loving the characters. Would recommend people to read. "
The alpha
"Interesting story line but I somehow got lost. I don't understand what happened to the brother or if she was somehow kidnapped. "
It’s ok
"Getting better looking forward"
Hood
"This has been pretty good a few errors but has kept me interested."
Review
"Reporters hid tracking devices in shoes that were supposed to be recycled, and they ended up at a market in Indonesia instead"
Needs some work
"Writing style is poor. It feels very rushed, like I’m missing important information to be able to enjoy the story in my imagination. The grammatical errors and lack of punctuation is forcing me to reread the sentences multiple times. How old is the main character? Which year in school? Please consider adding more to the story and characters. Main character feels cold, like she and the story lacks depth. I’m not relating to her or the surroundings. We’re not getting a description of the kidnapper - if she can’t see him - what does her other senses tell her? “Electrifying”, but smell, sounds, texture… is she hungry? Nauseous, scared, getting chills? She has a cold, is that affecting her? Nobody talking to her in school? Liked the plot - but unfortunately didn’t make it past the first chapter. "
