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Far out

"Very interesting & confusing. Hunting right words to describe it. Looking forward to more chapters. Let the action continue. Fantastic story."

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Very good attempt

"I will share what was shared with me some time ago, when I published one of my earliest works. This feels like a good first draft. I enjoy the overall story structure and the idea; however, it certainly would improve dramatically with editing and a fresh look after this much time. The idea of them arriving and then discovering what looks like a previous colony that already adapted does intrigue me, plus the different species and groups that all work together, but not in agreement, to try and manage a hostile environment. Not at all trying to be harsh, just being honest, as this feels like a very earnest and early attempt at a story, and it certainly has masses of room for improvement if you just give it some more love."

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New Earth 2.0

"Interesting and new approach to colonization of a new planet. "

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I really loved the idea of it very fresh

"It's all amazing and good but it would have been better if there were more chapters and new plots and tell the background of Se and other creatures,the book is very short probably need new chapters "

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Best

"Loved it very much !!! Superb work guys . Nice story...."

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A New Earth 2.0

"I really liked the book because of simple reasoms ALIENS and the possibility that things like this could really happen. One thing I couldn't understand was why did it only have 10 chapters even if it did it felt like I was reading a whole movie plot! So thank you for making this wonderful book. "

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Great Everything

"Great so far. Just how I think science fiction is supposed to be written. Keeps readers inter rested and hard to put down. So I am waiting to see what is going to happen on every page. I would suggest this book to any one who is a?big fan of science fiction. There are some areas where different words should have been used. An example would be the word were was used in place of are."

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Darvin Sumrall

"I like the story , i like science fiction "

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A good story

"It was an overall good story except the grammer. Actually i was so lost in the character that i did not pay muh attention to the grammer"

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Awsome Book

"I dislike the healots but the se and the omn are good. The writing needs a bit of work though . The plot itself is good and I would recommend to alot of people. Over all I gave it a 14/15. The writing was difficult to read. "

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So far

"The book is a really good read so far I am looking forward to what is to come."

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A new Earth 2.0

"There are a few words and sentences that does not make sense due to choice of words being used in the sentence and or paragraphs...still give credit and effort tho for a very interesting and captivating story would like to know if the story continues or if is going to be left as is "

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Nice work

"Make on avenger a book "

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earth 2.0

"I was amazed and impressed hope to see more of your work keep up the great job God Bless and peace be with you"

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A New Earth 2.0

"I loved this story! And as I read it I wonder what I would find on a new Earth, if by chance I were to be transported onto one. There are several places where a word is misspelled or missing which needs work. I find that if I have my computer read my work to me, I can hear the mistakes, and then correct them, this may also work for you. All in all this is a great little story and I look forward to reading more of this authors work."

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Earth 2.0

"Pretty good "

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A New Earth 2.0

"I really enjoyed this story. I hope there will be a sequel. "

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Yes!! It was amazing

"Hey dear, I want you to continue it please, I just loved it. it was mysterious ,adventurous moreover it was amazing,fabulous,lovely. I dont have words to explain it. Although it have some grammatical mistakes but it's okay!! It is just wow!!!!loved it......💕💕 Please continue this story......please please please.....I would like to request you for that ....🙏🏼🙏🏼"

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Earth 2

"I would recommend proofreading your work. "

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