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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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Amber

"Great book! Very well written and enjoyable. "

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Failing Moon

"Great storyline, and suspense. Builds curiosity and anticipation while been fun."

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A bit different, in a good way

"Intriguing! Want to read more"

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Failing Moon

"Absolutely love this story. Love the humor and the mystery. I like how the lead female is feisty and innocent. Always looking forward for an update and the author doesn’t fail to deliver. Can’t wait to read more ♥️"

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Hey fellow readers!

"Hi, I really hope you enjoy Failing Moon. It is a very light and fun novel, a bit different writing style compared to the other two I am working on. I try to update as often as I can, but because it's not a contracted novel, it unfortunatly takes a back burner at times. I will always update the moment I am free as this novel has defintely become my more favorite to write. If you aren't looking for deep thoughts and overly imaginative descriptions, then you can definitely enjoy this. Any suggestions, bad, good, great or horrible, I beg you, please let me know! I'd rather find out and fix, than be oblivious to what I should have caught. Happy reading ya'll! :)"

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The falling moon

"Story is nice...only there are certain spelling errors....in 2-3 places apart from that everything is fine....the story is interesting, engaging....good job !!! "

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Clever twist

"Cleanly written, with good bones for story development and characters. It is well paced and thought out, without a hint of slapdash or lack of confidence. I'm enjoying the unusual foundation for the supernatural and greatly looking forward to reading how the author crafts the plot. "

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Okay

"Pretty decent. Curious to know wat happens next "

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