Inkitt
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His kids

"There were too many grammar and spelling errors. The rest of the novel was good."

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Maya

"I love the book so much tho there are some words that are spelled wrong I still love the book "

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His Kids

"It's good, I just hoping for additional chapters. But it is okay. Loved it"

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An enjoyable read

"A good story that is a light and enjoyable one evening read (or at least for me, as i never let go until i finish the book when i read one). I liked the happy ending, i liked the flow of the story, i would have liked a bit more juicy details in the love story between the main characters, but i guess the story reflects the author's writing style, and that is fine, as everyone concentrates on different things when writing. I think my only downside comment would be to proof read the story as in many places there were multiple grammar and/or spelling mistakes as those done when somebody types in a hurry ;) Thank you for your hard work!"

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Amazing ♥️♥️♥️

"That was so amazing ♥️ I really enjoyed reading your novel ♥️ the storyline was amazing and we'll written ♥️ I can't wait to read more of your novels ♥️♥️"

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Sorry

"Horribly written. Couldn’t even get threw the first few chapters! "

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