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The Moonstone

"What a wonderful story! I enjoyed every moment of this emotional roller coaster! Thank you Author for sharing this amazing story! I couldn’t put it down!"

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Virgie's Take

"Thayer is the best lover, handsome and powerful. Our poor girl tried hard to fight the bond. Danny and Spence were great supportive players in this action-packed love story."

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Very compelling story!

"I love the great character details throughout the story. Each character has their own quirks, personalities, and gifts to the story. It was so great at pulling you into the emotion of the family relationships, her disability, and moral compasses. I'd recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a little fantasy in their life. There were a few aspects of the story I wanted a little more explanation of, but that means the biggest problem I found was I wanted MORE of things. There are a lot of books about vampires and werewolves but this still felt really fresh and entertaining. I genuinely enjoyed reading it and always felt drawn back to read the next chapter. Loved it! You've got amazing story and character development skills. This should be professionally edited, worked, and published. Thanks for sharing it! "

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Great story!

"Love this book! Absolutely must read. Plenty of action, mystery, and witches! Gotta have witches! Loved it! Thank you!"

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Tremendous!

"This was a great book! Plot was great and the characters perfect! Your writing skills are amazing!!"

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Great!!!!

"What a wonderful story very different from normal werewolf, vampire books I enjoyed it thoroughly. The only criticism is that it could be edited a bit. Other than that. Great job! I recommend reading this."

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Great story

"Loved reading this book, i hope there was more since i could'nt stop reading and looking forward to reading more of your books"

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The moonstone

"this was really good"

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The Moonstone

"I really enjoyed this story. "

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The Moonstone

"I really enjoyed this book, I loved that it didn’t follow the usual rules you read about in Werewolf novels. "

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The Moonstone

"Loved this story. Thanks "

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Loved it

"Loved the plot and the characters "

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The moonstone

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it from beginning to end such a roller-coaster of emotions throughout ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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The moonstone

"This book is amazing, it is different, and I absolutely love the strong female lead in the book and the process of the story!! Cant wait for more! "

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The moonstone

"Yes I love this book,more chapters I hope 😊"

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The Moonstone

"This book was very intriguing, has a good plot and story line. Needs some grammatical editing and I can’t wait for the finished book!"

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The Moonstone

"Needs a lot of editing fie duplications and extra words. Lots of times using similes which are words that sound alike, but mean something different. Ex: course/ coarse. Course is used like, Of course! Coarse is rough texture. There are a lot of words used inappropriately. Try running through a grammar check, not just a spell check before you upload a chapter. I still find things confusing as I’m not really sure about the plot. How does Danny see the stone that is supposed to be cloaked? Why did he know what is was but her mate had no clue when he saw it? And why would you run through a whole conversation of Aussie slang and not explain to your readers what the girl was saying! I know it left me wondering what the point was! One last thing: wondering means you are internally thinking about something, wandering is when you’re walking around not really knowing where you are headed. She was wandering through the mansion, not wondering. ❤️😎❤️"

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So far so good

"Interesting story, well written, just needs editing and to be finished. "

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