Everything was perfect, a bit of misspelled words but overall it was wonderful

"-This book was perfect -i would recommend my best friend read it -i picked all five stars because this book is what others need to read because things like this can happen in real life"

His game of Simon says

"I loved the plot.. full suspence made me stick to the story Plot was good how the hero was shown as villian im the begining so we eont suspect the real one.... I guess some more twists could be added in the plot and more light could be given on Lillian and Simon's relationship...as well as Mason's Other wise a perfect story.. "

Loveeeeeee itttttt!!!!!

"I love it lots"

Review of neha

"Loved it. It was different and lovely. I dont have words but i loved it."

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Review

"The grammar is kind of bad, like there are a lot of typo. But beside that the story is great and exiting. Thanks for writing it"

Simon Says

"I just wish there wasn't so many spelling mistakes but other than that I think it's a great story line so far and I can't wait to see what happens next."

His game of Simon says

"An interesting read but it can be longer between Lilian realizing her love for Simon and Mason's decision to end her. Grammer needs work. Proofreading would have helped alot."

Simon Says

"The plot of this book is very interesting, the pacing is really good and the protagonist's relationship with the antagonist develops quite nicely. A piece of advice will be to pay attention to grammar, punctuation, setting and character development. After meeting the two boys her relationship with Noah doesn't really build and so does her relationship with Mia. However great book and I look forward to more!"

Good Story Line

"She could work on her grammar. But other than that, great job!"