Grammar ugh

"The thing with the grammar is killing me! You have the word are for the word our. Example Are you ready to go? Our dog needs to go to the vet. You’re not coming? Is this yours? See the difference! I don’t know where your from but it’s about to drive me insane but I do love your story"

Four crowns

"First of all...this book is AMAZING the plot is AWESOME. "

It's very interesting

"I love this book so far and I can't wait till we get to the exciting part. "

Four Crowns

"The plot is interesting and a unique take on fantasy. I personally feel the story is moving a bit fast and your technical writing skills could use a little more improvement. But a great story in making overall"

Review

"The plot is captivating, but there are many grammar mistakes"

Good

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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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