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Nice plot and narration

"Love the way ur describing the sequence of events as well as character development..i hope.u do something about brayden's justice with the pack mates who had bewronged him."

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The Luna's Alpha

"I'm on chapter 7 and can't wait to read the rest of the book I'm loving it so far."

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About story and please continue

"I like how you present the feeling and love. I like it this story please continue unlike another story which show how bond is everything. In this story feeling matter please continue this story."

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TheLuna's Alpha

"I've enjoyed the story very much. Can not wait for more updates. "

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Fun

"Such a fun read!"

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Amazing

"I really appreciate how you deal with these themes. It’s so relatable. Raising kids is hard, frustrating, and highly rewarding. The ups and downs you portray here give such dimension to your characters. No one is ever one thing and the dynamics you’re exploring are amazing. I can’t wait to read more!!"

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The Luna's Alpha

"At first I was upset with Brayden Now I am understanding him more and accepting some of his actions. He's slowly settling into the role. Hoping he will eventually forgive his father when he realizes it was all for the good of the pack. I'll recommend this book to anyone who loves reading M/M books. You definitely have to read the first book to fully understand this one."

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The Luna alpha

"Can’t wait for nxt chapters I just wish braiden would be a bit more relaxed n start giving Damien more leeway to him& his precious brothers&sisters I think there will tears ov sadness but also happiness brayden deserves happiness to be able to relax more thank for a brillient story of friendship & love&hate love from zoey uk H"

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The male Luna/the Luna’s Alpha

"As a gay guy I fell in love with the series i came across book one on watt pad then found out i had to purchase it and I was like.. hmmm, i am invested but would I buy it? Then found out it wasn’t that pricey and immediately bought it and finished it in like a day. Anyways i am invested also in love with the characters, me an my friend were hoping travis and Brayden would of denied their mates together at the run and get together but we know how that ended anyways can’t wait for this to continue might be the only series i actually care about rn and i really hope Brayden finds a way out and gets his freedom back."

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