What is your opinion?
Cool
"Would like to know more what dwarfs did to snow white"
Wow
"Not the snow white I knew grown up. Wow really good. Now we need a Cinderella."
Sandra c
"Twist on traditional. Perfect. A total fantasy but enjoyable. Carry on . Can't wait to see your version on the princess and the pea. I have my own naughty ideas on that ha ha. Thanks for the read."
Snow White
"Nice variation"
Minor spelling issues, Major plot twist
"Wishing there was more to the story. It wrapped up nicely with a good plot twist, but I was hoping for more action between snow and the dwarves. Knocking her up would of been a bonus too."
Good Story
"I really like the story overall, but I do feel like it needed more steamy scenes. For example with the step father. And I feel like the end was rushed and could of used more."
Snow white
"Because of hearing the story so many times over the years in different adaptations I found myself `skipping to the good bits' to be honest having said that I really loved the good bits and would have liked those scenarios to be more indepth and lengthier."
