Dreams full of love

"This is a good story written in English by someone who has English as a second language. There are numerous grammatical errors, especially in pronoun usage (which is tricky) and a couple of misplaced or misused words. I am continuing to muddle my way through and encourage you to continue with your writing in English as practice makes perfect! Your story is interesting and the family situation is relatable. I love that your female lead was so loved by all and stayed strong and true throughout. Good job 👍🙏"