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Loved it

"Story with a dark twist , though the ending was unexpected i still enjoyed the book."

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Sinful Cinderella

"Love the twist and the irony of the ending! Awesome!"

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Unexpected plot twist

"Put off reading this book for a long time. Finally decided on it and I'm so impressed with the twist. Never expected the fairy tale twist.... You are one good writer"

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Sinful Cinderella

"Well done fabulous plot twist."

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Sinful Cinderella

"Excellent spin on fairy tales!"

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Fairy godmother (like) Prince(dislike). Recommend to friends. Feelings

" Love fairy godmother. My frienda Feelings"

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Sinful Cinderella

"All these plots twists had my head spinning, AWESOME!!!!! A truly amazing read from a talented author. Great job."

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Sinful Cinderella

"I love this. I love the tone, the twists, and the creativity. If you have other work on this site, I'm going to check it out. I'm spotting a few grammatical errors here and there, but those are easy fixes. The one content edit I have is something I put in the comments: why doesn't she try to use her magic earlier to make her gown for the ball? I get that there's not a lot of magic left in the bottle, but she still doesn't consider it a possibility in general. That left a bit of a hole in the logic of the story, but so far, that's my only criticism. I can't wait to see how this ends!"

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AMAZING

"This author is by far one of the best I’ve seen on here. So creative, I’ll definitely be checking out her books on Amazon ! "

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Sinful Cinderella

"It's worth the time. Short but magnificent. I really like the twist of this story. Not your typical fantasy fairy tale Cinderella story. "

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Sinful Cinderella

"A dark twisted Cinderella! Awesome how writer wrote this book! It was a welcomed change to a normal fairy tale story! Well done!"

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Sinful Cinderella

"Wonderfully scripted with a sense of dark humor... I would definitely watch it if it was turned into a movie .. Good Job, Author!"

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Twist and Turns

""If Cinderella had periods" is a funny way to describe this. Though the time and place of this story is different, some readers can find themselves relating to our MC, Cindy. The plot was top notch. It's second to none! I won't spoil it to anyone who'd reading the reviews before reading the book, but it is spicy spice!"

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Cinderella

"Cinderella with a twist awesome. I love that she's evil and the prince! Mind f**KS all around. Bravo!"

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Master piece

"If you want to read something awesome and new than read this one everything EVERYTHING bout that book is amazing, the twist, the characters and just how beautifully dark it is not one of these dark story pretenders that you know "

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Loved it ♡

"Loved it, the plot twist was so good. Can't wait to read the others stories by this amazing author!"

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Cindy be bad!

"My takeaway, a lovely, dark twist on the classic fairy tales. I know that the original tales are nothing like the disney versions, but Anita Valle makes them hers with a clever, insightful look into the human psyche with the added fun of magic. Well done!"

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Sinful Cinderella

"I loved this book! I was so pleasantly surprised. This is the first book I have read Inkit, and I was very impressed. This book is extremely well written, very engaging, and very unique. I’ve never read anything quite like it. Most books on these types of apps are poorly written and not very imaginative. I wish it was longer and more fleshed out (because I enjoyed it so much!)."

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Sinful Cinderella

"This book is a fun and morbid twist on a classic fairytale. It’s so unique and an amazing read!"

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Sinful Cinderella

"A surprising inside story of the Evil Queen. Praises to the author for thinking out of the box, especially making the Prince an evil one..."

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