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the wrong sister

"your story is really good i like this kind of story🥰🥰🥰"

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The wrong sister

"I thought this story was very good, but the plot was stupid, I mean he could have easily found out that she had a twin sister! But it made for a very entertaining story anyway!"

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The plot is okay, but not enough dopamine because the story to short.

"I like it: -when author show POV from the character. -simple words, easy for me to understand (english not my 1st language, so I'm not a fan of poetic words) -happy ending (i really digging a sad story with happy endings) I dislike: - when the story has no suspense. I know the plot is predictable, but sometimes i want something new that i cannot predict. Atleast show me some emotions. - not enough explanation about kayla's acts, why she not mentioned it to her sister layla when she know about axel's family. She must know axel is alex's brother. But she keep layla hanging by telling her anything. "

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I do NOT recommend

"I do not really like the writing style. Lots of grammatical error and interchanging of the names of characters. It needs a lot of work done. Sorry author but it's the truth in my opinion."

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