chapter 1
Auther: Mel. original story
Hi my name is Kyle and I live in a small village far away from any city/town. I live with my mom and brother Mike. My brother and I always loved exploring abandoned places like: caves,houses,and feilds. He was always the golden child. Thats why I was so suprised when he killed me. I will have my revenge! But lets start where it began shall we.
My brother and I told our mom, "we're going to go exploreing at Red Rose cave." She said "ok be back by five and have fun." We went to the store first tho because it was a difficul way to travel by foot. We got food,drinks,and extra batteries. Then off we went. We got there about oneidh and in we went. It was cold,dark,and scary. We've always heard storys about this cave like, a demon roames here as a vengeful spirt but Mike never believed in them,I did tho. He was always the stronger,braver,smarter child. He took every chance he could to rub it in my face. As we walked in I saided "maybe we should head back Mike" "scaredy-cat" he said. I hated that he teased me all the time. As we went futher in with our flashligths it got darker,colder,and scarier it gave me the chills but I didn't say anything to Mike all he would do is tease me some more. We went futher and futher in. We eventually found a hole I looked in. It seemed pretty deep. I told Mike once again "we should head back" but he insisted we stay.