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A really beautiful writeup
"*SPOILERS* A really beautiful and well written write-up that fits mystery/thriller/horror genre perfectly and which requires the reader to have quite a high grasping power and the patience to read each line thoroughly to understand the story completely and appreciate it's beauty. Each chapter and each line serves a purpose. One can argue that the introduction of Ms. Pierre, the MC's housekeeper/helper who she thought was possessed by a demon or the line "Laughing during a sad part of movie" was insignificant and served no purpose but these were few of many subtly sprinkled phrases which hinted to her having schizophrenia. These hints can be found all over the story, which is what truly holds the beauty of the story and the genius of the writers mind as these can be left unnoticed as they weren't giving out too much details, but on the other hand they also weren't too underwhelming to be lost in all the chaos. It was perfectly balanced and blended in seamlessly, which to me is as art, as it is very hard to pull off. Every element of the story like the plot, setting, character development, etc was well written. I even found the title 'White Eyes' to be very apt, and it took me a few readings and had to crack my head a little bit to finally understand why the author gave the story the title it has. First of all, the wolf was like a metaphor, as the MC was getting locked up by her mother, which is what was happening to the wolf. His annoyed her as she could relate to The pain of being locked up, hence she kills the games operator and her mother in the same way. Secondly, as the MC during the killing was hallucinating; and even after watching the videos, she has no recollections of those things happening, and hence she is 'blind' to them and a blind person is generally depicted with eyes bare of pupils i.e with 'white eyes'. The entire story was totally worth the read and I look forward to read more write-ups from the author, archita57 Karthiksai"
don't miss this one out
"a perfect mix of nail-biting anxiety, mind bending terror and psychological twists Can't wait for more stories like these, genuinely enjoyed reading it <3"
so good holy shit
"the mysterious and psychedelic theme of the story kept me on the edge of my seat till the very end it's so sick, how you unveil it towards the end that it's not a normal story about any other teen and rather a masterpiece full of raw emotions was really impressive. WRITE MORE PLEASE i really wanna hear theories about the grey wolf from others."
A MUST READ!!
"The story’s main idea is what makes it special. After every chapter, you feel like wanting to read more and getting to know the character more. The story ends, leaving the audience to want to know more about what the narrator is going to do. (Makes me want to start my own theories). A really powerful and an intriguing story of its kind. We need another part to this story."
