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Some spelling issues

"Overall love this story just a few spelling errors "

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Everything was lovely..I loved the prehistoric setting ..I'd recommend ll it to my friend..I chose the rating because the book deserves it

"I loved the prehistoric setting of the book I gave the rating because the book deserved it"

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The Queen was bent on having a heir to the thorn and the prince was in love with a woman that was pregnant with another man baby.wow great story

"I like the story and want to read more stories like this "

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Good

"Good going"

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Thumbs up

"Good writing "

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Tease

"Grammar on top😅😅"

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Loved it!

"Nice book but would have been nice to see how the pregnancy went and if they got closer "

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His filthy consort

"All in all this wasn't very good and interesting short story in my opinion. I would have loved it to be longer though. Thank you so much for writing this short story.😊❤️😊"

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His filthy consort

"Enjoyed the read looking forward to more"

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Prince

"Short and nice though spelling challenges "

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His Filthy Consort

"This book was so good. I loved how he fell in love with first consort and her being mild, meek and soft. Then she just pulled the rug from under him with the fisherman. And she didn't even say anything when the prince found her. And all Kiesha wanted was to be humiliated, downgraded, etc and now she is pregnant and a noble (who probably still get humiliated) lol."

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very captivating

"I wanted more of this , it is so erotic and captivating, honestly i had my eyes clued till it finished. Thanks so much for this piece."

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Interesting book

"Wish there was a chapter or two but it was a nice short story to read."

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The consort

"It's intense and pulse racing "

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Loved it

"Simply loved it "

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Definitely a short story….

"I am not into short stories, I like novels but I could not sleep so I settled on this short story…. It was a good short story, but I will choose a full story or an on going book before reading a short story again…. What was not to my liking was very light BDSM not graphic at all! Needs more detailed scenes!"

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Review o'clock

"A nice read💕💕"

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Book

"I was actually wa looking for another author and stumbled on this book, which looks interesting."

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Great story, bad writing

"The story is great and I would actually wish it was longer. Only downside is the grammar and writing technique is way off. "

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Interesting read

"I do think it most probably could have been a longer story it did have the suspense and intrigue for it"

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