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Lovely story!

"I enjoyed reading this story! It was heart-warming, sweet and lovely. Kudos to the author!"

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S & J

"I thoroughly enjoyed this little short. My being a big girl myself, I can relate to some of her feelings. Jae was right in pushing her away when they were younger, he wanted to be free, but not hurt her. Kudos, Jae. There were some wording issues, but not enough to take away from the story. Thank you for sharing."

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Nostalgic

"What I enjoyed most while reading this was the nostalgic feel it brought, especially from the childhood beginning to teenage years, and then to the present times. I can relate to development of the characters journey and their togetherness even after years of distance. It was an enjoyable and easy read, which allowed for a vivid visual of every experience and characters feelings down to the simple moments such as them listening to the music and lying down on the carpet. I look forward to reading the others. "

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Loved Loved Loved 😍😍

"Oops I thought I had written my review on this already. Like I simply loved the one shot. I liked especially how he didn't play her and knew he wasn't ready to settle down, so he tried to protect her from that but in the end, he knew she was always the one. Love IT 😍😍😍"

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Sera & Jae

"🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🧡💕💕💕"

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❤️❤️❤️❤️

"This by far the best short story I have ever read and I love how their lives are detailed "

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Beautiful love story

"Cute love story"

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Awesome

"Awesome short should be more to it but overall average and good to read"

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Seraphine and Jaebum

"I love this story. I love the storyline, character development, and the flow of the story. I would recommend this book for young adults and adults. This is a story of going from childhood to adulthood, finding love, maturing and experiencing life and every emotions in between during those years. The issues dealt with were realistic and relatable. I truly enjoyed reading this one shot story and would highly recommended it to other readers, which is why I gave it five (5) stars.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"

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Diferentes! But beautiful.

"This novel gave alot of new generation, and I liked that."

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Seraphine and jarbum

"Love this one good job Thank u"

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