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Good stuff so far

"Interesting set of characters, good character set-up and plot development"

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Rock my world

"I wanted to add that this story description says it's horror, it's not, I'm glad I read it anyway!"

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Good story

"Good story"

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Rock my world

"Good dialogue, plot, characters. Would have like to read a bit further of the father / daughter dynamics"

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Rock My World

"Beautiful story!!! The characters are pretty realistic and the plot is interesting. Could use some editing though. Misspelled words, incorrect words and punctuation detract from the loveliness of the story. I hope other aspiring readers see this part in particular; pay a local high school English teacher to proof read for you. It will clean up your writing, give it a more professional feel and make reading it more enjoyable. "

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Wow!

"Good read!! It was a little slow Starting and honestly after The first 5 or 6 chapters I quit Reading it & read several other Books before coming back to it. I do not regret it. Oh how I ended Up loving this story!!! It’s 5am & I stayed up all night because I Couldn’t put it down. My hubby Is not going to be impressed But hey, I am! Here’s hoping You write more stories like this one!"

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