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Nice

"Very good, its fun and different, the funny remarks added humour and the font used for the book in the novel helps breaking it up"

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So spicy! 💙💙

"I love it! "

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Exactly what I was looking for

"Book is pretty good, didn’t see much error so far. Thanks for the read "

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Hard Plays and lays

"Hard Plays and lays is a good book with a fast plot. It's for people who like the sauce and don't want to wait too long. Rate a 10"

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Sweet, Sexy Snapshot

"BLUF: just loved it. DOWN: needs more editing, and the head hopping sometimes takes me out of the sensual moment to reconfigure (though not too much). UP: this intriguing little tale grabs me with vivid imagery and a compelling plot I would want to follow further into their story. The ending might’ve been a little too saccharine for such characters, but I loved their steamy buildup to it and the passion they shared. "

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Perfectly concise and well written

"For a short story, it had AMAZING tension and characterization, fantastic erotica and enough plot to be invested in. Love this author already"

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Easy plays and hard lays

"Loved the book and never thought it'll end that way butttttt it was a good ending and I was glad!! "

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Easy Plays & Hard Lays

"Loved it! Hot and spicy. Love happy endings"

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easy plays hard lays

"damn, my heart is still racing! this was fire from start to finish. I don't know which was better, the book or the story. i do know that the combination was explosive . everything about the story was phenomenal. it has everything a good erotic book should have great writing skills, loved the characters (all of them) your descriptive skills are above and beyond. there were a few typos, but nothing to distract from the story.. i look forward to reading more of your work, I hope they are as great as this one. thank you for sharing. "

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Unexpectedly Good

"I want to read more of their story. It was a good read."

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This is my new favourite book 💙

"Really good plot, love the idea! Amazing writing skills and adorable characters "

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Reading about reading smut, phfew... ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

"This story is very well written and the tension builds up beautifully. Bonus : no stereotypical body description (ML is not hung like a horse with a 6 pack, or anyway, maybe he is but that's not what's important here) and this is not smut for the sake of smut, there's a real story between the characters. Loved it !! "

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Hot, hot, hot! 🔥 🥵

"Spicy from the start!"

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Erotic and more….

"Dear author, where do you get your ideas?? 😅🔥🔥🔥 Hot. Fiery. Explosive. For me, the ending was the best part 😉😉😉"

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So good

"This is so good and steamy 🥰🥰🥰…… the featured novel was so hot 🥵 "

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Almost Perfect!

"This is a GREAT story, extremely well written. The author paints pictures in your mind so you can envision what is happening each step of the way. You "feel" what each person feels, and it is as if you are actually there. That is a rare writing talent. This author's writing style is so good that you can "feel" what is happening each step of the way. Searching for well written erotica on various websites is a daunting task. Only 1 in 100 stories (or less) qualify for a 5 star rating, or even a 4.75 or higher. This author excels in every area. FYI, I gave 4 stars only due to some grammatical issues. I hope the author will have someone qualified proofread their net story and catch those few errors. That would make this author's next book perfect in every way."

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Terrific!

"So good, my mind and body are still feeling the heat. Nothing to dislike. .....maybe if I read the book a few more times "

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Easy Plays and Hard Lays

"Such a good intense, steamy story, loved the book within a book, their tenderness after some very hot descriptions, just brilliant "

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Sweet & hot

"An erotic book about two people reading an erotic book 😍🌶🥵. It’s short, sweet and hot. No angst, betrayal or heartbreak. "

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Fun, Sexy, Hot, and Sweet

"RADonovan gives us a little bit of everything in this short, fun, sexy as hell, hot, and sweet erotica! And to top it off, she was able to masterfully blend the protagonists' story with tidbits of the erotica they were reading. Her writing style and technical skill is exceptional! I absolutely loooved Jess and Doyle's chemistry and the final chapter even got me a tad emotional! Love, love, loved this! 🥰"

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