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Interesting

"I love the store way too much..this seems interesting..I would like to know further about everything.The way it seems it's like that girl who's is kidnapped will fall in love with this lady who snatched her father's business and she seems to care about the girl..as she requested her to eat dinner with her ."

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Update

"when r u going to update, ur writing is really good. I really like how the way you wrote the plot, even though it's a bit confusing but well written!"

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Sweetness Blindness

"It's not my style, and that's okay. Just suicide is a tough thing and I don't like people talking about it that's all. "

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