What is your opinion?
10 Reasons Why
"You're doing a great job. I'm interested in more updates if you have any available 💜❤️Thx author 💜❤️"
Interesting storyline!
"This story is very interesting, and I would love to see how it turns out. I was confused in the beginning because I couldn’t understand what happened to the main character. I kept wondering what happened? The more I read on, I figured out what was going on. The storyline has potential, and I think you are a good writer. If you’re serious about writing, you will become a great writer. "
Needs so much improvement
"Has got a number of mistakes in them. Spelling, grammar, punctuation... Use grammarly to correct these and I don't think you've used the summary part right. You have to write the SUMMARY of the story in the summary section instead of write about YOU. It's quite understood that it's your first time writing and you can write about it on your wall post instead. And writing multiple pov's is a bit confusing stuff especially for the readers (talking from experience) So try to reduce the number of pov's from different characters. Write one pov in one chapter instead of trying to fit multiple ones in ONE SINGLE chapter. The plot of the story feels very shallow and dry. Instead of following the old style of writing a character description in the first page, try to make them readers find out on their own. Try following "Show and Not Tell". I hope you take this review in a positive light. I'm writing this because you've asked me to, in the post you posted on my wall. I wasn't up for doing any reading or reviewing but thought that maybe I could help someone improve. I'm used to being very honest about my criticisms so hope you don't feel hurt over this review and make improvements. I can rewrite a review once you've FELT that you've improved. Good luck."
