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It started with a heist

"This is one of the best novels I've ever read, I lost interest in reading a few months ago but this book sparked the interest back in me. "

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Very good 👍

"Reading a very nice story after long time. Thank you for sharing "

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Hook line and sinker

"I havent been able to put this down since I've started reading it. I love how unpredictable it is!!"

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It started with a heist

"Congratulations it’s a book to invest in loved the cats name sooo funny so many emotions loved it 🥺🥹🥰🎉🎊"

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Excellent book!

"By far the best story I have read on this platform. I cried real tears!! Well written and fantastic storytelling."

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Loved it! I wanna read more of them!

"I loved this book and I would recommend it to everyone."

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Great!!

"I need another chapter, pleaseeee!!"

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It started with a Heist

"Well written plot where you fall in love with the characters. Can't wait till the next chapters. "

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Clean Romantic Drama. She is a criminal. He is a cop.

"I have read the first 52 chapters of this book and I am very keen to see where the author takes this story. This is a clean story: no sex, swearing or violence. That means that in a novel with a thriller type plot there are some scenes where the details are brushed over, and there are some events that we infer happened off stage. This story had a twist that I did not see coming. The plot is engaging and the characters are well developed with strong emotional depth. "

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I want to read more!

"Fresh plot, new story and super easy to read. I love a good love story, and this one has a great twist! I waited sooo long for an update and I’ve binged all the way through the last 12 chapter! "

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Opposite worlds

"The plot has suspenseful twist and the writing is good"

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Absolutely freakin Amazing!

"The plot is so good, it emotional and written well. If this was a published book at like the stare so would buy it"

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Loving it!!!

"This is top notch!!"

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Great story!

"I loved the premise of this story, a professional thief falling in love with the FBI-Agent looking for her, and it has been delivered very well. The characters are beautifully developed, the tension is tangible and the love-story is beautifully written. I really hope they will find a way to be together against all odds!"

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Dlm

"Very interesting story. Can’t wait to read more of it. How will Jake, Emma and Eric turn out. Will love conquer for all three or heartbreak 💔..can’t wait to read more.."

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It started with a heist... Modern Adventure Rom(ance)

"This story is so great. The Idea is fantastic, the storytelling and description of the characters very good and interesting. I love how Emma and Jake tell each their part of the story and their thoughts. Emma is on a very dangerous mission, if she on one hand wants information from Jake and on the other hand is attracted by him. She knows the danger, but she likes to play with the fire. I can't wait for the next chapters. I hope you can update weekly a chapter, because it's very annoying to wait for so long. This story should become a very good book if you go ahead like this. "

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Interesting plot

"I enjoyed character building also how you keep adding comical relief as well as tension"

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It started with a heist

"I like the story too much,these two kids are clever very clever,but I think Emma is gonna get caught but at the same time I believe there's love on the air Her brother is serious about that job he is careful and little does he know Emmais in love I will recommend this book to my sister,she loves crime stories I gave this rating because the story is good, grammar is good,and it shows interest to the reader It's got that thing of don't stop keep on reading"

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Fantastic novel

"Great plot has good potential but definitely think Emma and Jake need a little more fleshing out as characters, I am sure with more chapters this will happen anyway. Great start ❤️‍🔥"

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Just WOW!

"Story that pulls you in. 5 chapters in and I'm hooked! "

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