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"I like the book so much"

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Wonderfully Thought Provoking

"Took me a while to realise, but the story reminds me of Pride and Prejudice, but an African version of it, as the story explores very important views in life through the lenses of one who is proud, and one who could be considered prejudiced. The two main leads, Dingani and Misozi, are characters on opposite ends of the spectrum, yet both have the ability and capacity to consider and grow to understand the views of each other through the events of the story. The characters are extremely well thought out, and their perspectives on life, philosophies and morals in life are spoken through their individual voices, making them very relatable, regardless of your own views on such topics. It gives them immense room for character growth as a result, of which is witnessed at a steady and satisfactory pace throughout the narrative of the story. Naturally, there is some room for improvement with grammar and punctuation, but much of that are typos, of which all writers make. It does not negatively affect the theme nor emotions of the story. The voice of the storytelling remains true to the ideals being explored within. Highly recommend The Start Of Something New!"

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Great story

"This story is interesting i would love to see what will happen to the main characters i hope love will blossom soon.great story loved the cultural aspects in it.keep on writting 😊"

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