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Lonely on the beach

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Summary

One day at the beautiful beach.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Silent– depopulated beach.

I’m lonely.

Thrilled by the touch of a gentle breeze.

The pure mind draws the dream of the future.

An unexpected step halt the frightened snail.

It is interfere in his freedom.

He is forced to defend himself inside the shell.

In fact guilty of unethical act, remorseful and ashamed.

The pearl glowing in the hot sand in the sunlight.

The red crab wanders here and there.

May be, their the struggle of life.

Either any festival or the cry of losing relatives.

Or, waiting for dearest.

Who knows?

Or not, tries to the last breath to survive from the predatory kestrel.

The snow-white clouds in the deep bluey sky disappear into an unknown destination.

Gives shadow to the unlimited ocean on the way.

Maybe the sea smiles shyly.

The horizon decorated bride with the rainbow colors.

Suddenly in the gusty wind the tamarisk like a bow bend.

The astray sea gull flies away at a dizzying speed.

Fierce sandstorm erase human footprints.

The blackish spot on forehead of the eastern sky.

The rushing waves at high speeds crash on the shore.

As if the drunkenly dancing endlessly on the shore chest.

I hear the scream of displaced trailer, shrub, grain of sand and the shore.

But don’t know, it is the judgment of nature or injustice.

The roar of the ocean shake up me.

Stunned of his immense power, frightened.

I stand depressed mind.

Take the deep sigh!

Come back, a time.

This amazing beauty of nature surrounded by unknown mysteries still pulling closer.

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