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"The first chapter has a great start!! I loved the start, I wish we had a tad bit more insight on them and who they are as people (Milo & James) , and I do feel like things happened a bit fast, I knew what was going to happen, but if things happened a bit slower I would've felt so much better. BUTTT HERE ME OUTT!! I am not complaining about it, stories can fluctuate like this is a whodunit! i love that. I just felt we could've had more insight on the characters to slow things down so we can have more of a connection with them as people. this story has so much potential and I absolutely cannot wait to dive in and read more! <33 "
GOOD JOB :)
"GOOD JOB"
