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WOW!

"THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I LOVE IT! Just a few small grammar issues, but otherwise, THIS IS BRILLIANT! When are the next chapters coming out?"

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Hanarete is almost as good as Hamilton!

"We hold these truths to be self evident that this book is epic! I think I might explode with how awesome this is. If I ever meet these Haelyra people I will implode. BAM. they are so good and cool my eyes are burning like Alexanders letters. Haelyra, you get the job done!"

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Hanarete

"This book is sooo good, I'd read this all night long! And it's written by TEENS??????? Whoever Haelyra is, you're awesome!"

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Hanarete

"I absolutely LOVED this book!!!!!!!! The story is amazing and the fact that it is written by young teens, WHOW! This is adult writing! AMAZING!"

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Loving this

"I know you probably will not see this but I love your work so far and it is absoloutly addictive. The only thing that bothers me is that I cant read all of it yet, sharing this to all of my friends and family members because it is so good. WOW"

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I love this book so far

"So I pressed on this book because I loved the cover design first of all, but when I started reading I became absoloutely obsessed, the plot is just amazing, and the characters have a clear sense of personality. At the start I thought this must of been written by young teens and not very... good quality, but when I got into It it was clear that this book was actually really engaging. I aboloutly cannot wait for the next 3 chapters AMAZING"

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"<3 Give me more! (SUPERB)"

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