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Family affair

"The story is very good, and the ideas that his daughter isn’t his daughter is an interesting idea that has yet to be explored "

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So wrong but so right

"This story is so wrong but so right and hot. It’s very well written in a way that everything is easy to picture in my mind’s eye. Some elements didn’t really follow through though: the mother, the tattoo, the friendship with the brothers, etc we were given these elements but nothing came out of them, no reaction from Eli and Rick about them … well yet because I’m not sure if the story is finished or not. "

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Please put some sort of ending on this

"Not only is it quite the...ehem.. story is actually got a few places it could go I'm hoping they find a way to make them all work but even if that doesn't happen I'd like at least am ending to the mom thing... "

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Family affair

"Wow just wow...tooo 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥..more updates please..thank you!!!!"

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The Family Affair

"Smoking! Could not stop ready and what a twist. Can’t wait for the updates since left a Christmas awaiting unwrapping of gifts. "

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Hot

"Grammar issue jumps From first to third person"

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Idk

"Keep updating need more "

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A Family Affair

"I liked everything about this book. I think maybe they should have told her the truth about Rick not being her biological father. Loved the book."

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Family affair

"So good and so wrong all at the same time "

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