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"It’s good. Like plot twist"

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Kathy king

"Nice story, not a lot of romance in it but still good; will recommend "

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Kassidy King

"From severe abuse to love. Definitely a sad story. To lose love and life in a day. I am sure she will be avenged as the Mafia King will avenge her"

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Captivating!

"I love the details put into the story and character experience. Keep up the good work! "

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Kassidy King

"Kassidy King, the cover is as stylish as the lead character. This is a PG18 content story with steamy in context, adult passages and action fights. The sensual passages are confidentially written. Kassi is complex and has done it tough. We gather this from the opening scene when she was aged nine. Her background is unfolded in snippets throughout the text. The action heats with pace as Kassi’s path crosses with the Japanese Mafia boss Kita and her plans for her independent business come under pressure. The punchy dialogue is a story highlight, as is a practical and insightful use of POV from Kassi and Kita. A feature of enjoyable writing is well-developed secondary characters like Chang, and the author has those in the novel. And love and work, can they mix? Strap yourself in for the ride with reveals, twists and turns that constantly keep you reading the unexpected. Reviewed to, chapter 22."

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Great

"I am enjoying how the story is unfolding. "

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Intriguing

"I think the story is very well written and also something new and fresh. What doesn’t fit to me is the Japanese culture description. 1) the story is located in Japan. I think the Chang family name is more Chinese so it doesn’t fit to much with the role. 2) traditionally the bath in Japan is taken once you have cleaned your body 3) I like the story but Kita’s behaviour doesn’t look to me as bad as I would expect as a Yakuza member. I hope it helped. "

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