The Night of First Ages

"This would be a killer book if it had more then three chapters. A body gets tired of waiting for a break in this story. It seems to go on and on floating on a sea of forever where you never reach the end of the chapter. chapters two and three are even longer and seem like forever to the end. Please break this book up in to book one, book two, and book three, With chapters in each book. I have read and commented on over 60 Inkitt books. and want to give this book a fair rating, but as there are no chapter breaks and no page numbers, it is hard to finish one of your chapters, in one setting, then when you go back to read where you left off it takes forever to find your stopping off place, and quite frankly it's not worth my time to do so! Please divide this book into 6-8 page chapters, when you do I will be only too happy to reread you story, and change the rating that I have given this book, and I'm betting that others will want to read t also! I wish you only the best of luck! NRF"