Inkitt
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Engaging!!!

"Has me hungry to read more. Very well written. I’ve really enjoyed the back story of the siblings. "

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Great story

"This is a great story. The author writes with a great imagination. Looking forward to reading more of this and hoping for a great experience."

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Interesting plot

"This story helps to give you the reader the other side of the stories of the two other princes from the other land. This story seems to bring a whole roundness to the other stories."

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Great story so far

"Going good, can’t wait to see where the main characters go now "

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Brilliant

"I love all your books. Keep doing what you are doing as they are all great! "

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Great

"We’ll write story that will have you wanting more "

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Forbidden tragedies

"I love it. The laid back attitude of the prince and the first the pet."

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