What is your opinion?
MEED BOOK 2
"Well, I can say that THAT didn't end how I thought it would. WTF was Chase thinking? That she wouldn't find out? That he could bind her to him with a "promise" ring instead of an "engagement" ring? Oh right, he couldn't give her an engagement right cuz he was already engaged. I really hope she never goes back to him."
Alpha wants me
"I just picked this book out for fun and I could not put it down it was awesome!"
The Alpha wants me
"This is a suspenseful, page turning adventure. "
Move
"Why don't storm just move an go back to where her parents live bc now kensley is gonna be evil. U can tell chase cares about storm but not enough to be with her bc at the same time he likes to play games with her heart. She needs to show him that she can really move on by moving away from there bc if he really cares an wants her then he will come find her an show her. Let him feel the heartbreak for once"
Interesting story
"I like the plot and the main characters. It shows the struggle between a couple when one person can’t commit to the other and the hurt the other person has because of that struggle. Give it a read."
The Alpha Wants Me
"I loved this story, the plot, the author’s writing style and the characters. I loved the two main characters and their interaction. They make a great couple and seem to really care for each other. I would like more characters to see where their relationship goes. "
The Alpha Wants Me
"I am liking this story and want to know what will happen between Storm and Chase. Can’t wait for next chapters 👍🏼💕"
Alpha is engaging and peppered with life-like situations of 'relationships' and caring and many other aspects that help engage the reader...
"I rated higher than what I might otherwise have because the plot and situations are engaging enough to keep me entertained... I would greatly suggest having me edit your work to eliminate misspellings and errors that hinder the reading experience... (examples;) 'she' should not be used when two females are interacting, because we do not know which one did (whatever)... 'waiving' should be *waving* (goodbye or hello or acknowledging presence) is distracting on numerous occasions... plenty of other sentence structures and such that definitely detract from an otherwise engaging read... Contact NoFret Brett on FB if you would like me as an editor... "
Love by an alpha
" Yes I love the book. The book is very interesting. Cant really complain. It keeps you in suspense though"
The alpha wants me
"Amazing I can't stop waiting for the next update "
Fiesty
"Love the back and forth "
The alpha wsnts me
"J aime tout de ce livre. Bonne histoire."
Some of the words are rumbled around, or the sentences don’t make sence
"Some of the words are jumbled around and some of the sentences don’t make sense, but overallI like it. "
:) interesting
"I am really curious about continuation of the story."
The Alpha wants me.
"Need to read whole book before I comment "
Brats thought
"I liked the way they meet and how the attraction was there from the start but I don’t like how it is in this chapter. I would tell my friends to read this. "
When will the rest be done?
"I liked the plot, not too fond of the talking aspect.also the transition from chapter 41 to 42 needs some work as I don't understand how it goes from being beaten up and then to storm eating food. Overall though I would be interested in reading more"
Dee
"Loving this story but I feel I'm just getting into it and the chapter ends too quickly"
My review
"I loved the alpha male persona. It reminds me of Klaus & Caroline from vampire diaries. I'd recommend this book to anyone who would listen. The only thing I would change is some of the dialouge is unclear and some statements are hard to understand. Hopefully you continue to write & grow with your stories. We stop growing as people when we stop learning. Thank you for sharing a story for our entertainment. You're going places!!"
Unknown
"There were grammatical errors that made it hard to follow what was being conveyed. Other than that I think the plot is very good."
