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LOL!

"In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)"

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Great story tbh

"Love it in all honesty. Slightly longer than I had assumed but it’s great. There’s just some conflicting words used in the story."

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Actualy I like the book

"Actually I like the book. Just one criticism. The word guardian does not describe what Williamson will be to the Lady. A guardian would make decisions about her lands, her finances, who she would marry, etc. I don't believe Williamson is supposed to do that at this point. Right now he is going to guard her. Better to stick to that for now. Good luck with your book."

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