CHAPTER 1: 7 years ago
"I, Mike Gilles didn't even know how I got this
way. I was just full of anger and hate. My anger
turned to fury then to rage. now I'm in the final stage
7 years ago
"Look at him, he's such a loser"
"Hahahaha"
This was how it all started. See
A tall boy with brown eyes named Caiden Millers walked up to him. He began kicking him in front of everyone and threw away all the things in his school bag. and then she came. The love of his life,Ellie Wayland. She had long brown hair and light brown eyes.
"Hey! Caiden stop!"Ellie commanded and he stopped. "Quit behaving childishly,"she confronted.
Caiden smiled."Babe we were just fooling around,right?"he said. "Firstly, never ever ever call me babe again and secondly, I don't care if you were fooling around, that's dangerous, "Ellie said sternly. She bent down and started packing his things for him.
"Are you hurt?"
"Eh?"
"Are you hurt?" Ellie asked again in her meek, loving voice that Mike couldn't help but blush.
"It's only a few bruises,"he answered shyly. Ellie grabbed his hand and took him up.
"Come,"she began,"I'll take you to the infirmary."
XXX AT THE INFIRMARY XXX
Sit here and wait for me,"Ellie said before she left. Mike felt like he was on top of the world. Ellie Wayland, his longtime crush was finally taking notice to his presence. By thinking about it, he began smiling to himself. Then Ellie came back.
" The school nurse isn't around,"she informed."I guess I have to do it myself." Ellie sat down beside him and started treating his wounds. Mike kept on blushing till she finished, then they went back to class together. Then it was only a matter of time, The real bullying started. Caiden and his friends: Preston Rivers and Jack Foster came to the men's room where Mike was. He was beaten mercilessly by Caiden and his friends. He was on the floor when Caiden spoke up.
"Dude, I've seen the way you look at Ellie. She's mine," he said then left with his friends. That very day, his mom found out about the bullying in his school and had him leave. That was when he promised himself to get revenge and get Ellie.
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As I was reading, I couldn’t help but picture it as a comic. The way you build scenes and tension? It would shine with visuals. I’m a freelance artist, and I specialize in turning powerful stories like yours into vivid, emotionally-driven comics. I’d be beyond excited to collaborate with you and bring your world to life on the page.
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Warmly,
Lizzie