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Pretty good

"For me, this book is one of the best, despite it being quick and short, it's still good!"

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Pretty good for a short story!

"It's pretty good, not perfect, but good, the plot is a little too hard to digest because of it being quick but it's still pretty good nonetheless, the writing style is good I'd say that... Though there are some misspelled words and some over punctuated sentences (maybe it's for some dramatic pauses but who knows?) Well, that's all for now, I'll go and read the next one right now!"

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This book isn't good, it's the best!!

"As an amateur reader who just started very recently with this book, I felt like this knocked all that I'm looking for for a short story... 10/10!"

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I love the book!

"What I loved about Rafaelle's writing is that he made it seem like it's not him telling the story but rather his character Wyatt, really did a good job here Rafaelle!!"

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