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Bewitched!

"Two chapters at the time of the review. Definitely reading more as they come out. I don’t know yet whether her spell worked on the intended target, but I’m drawn in and hooked. I don’t have any suggestions on how to improve the story, at all (apart from, I wish there was more of it!) The writing style is smooth, clear and characterful. Soft world-building is used, and it feels very natural to slide in and kick start the story. The pacing is great, and I feel connected to our MC immediately, curious about what she’s up to and where this fellow is. Great stuff :)"

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