Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

When I Met You!

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Manvitha Rathod, a 23 year old innocent who wants to live an independent life running away from all that which isn't letting her live the life she wished to. Stays with her only best friend away from her family. Vivaan Mittal, a 27 year old young man who's currently working in a IT industry with his own hardwork being an orphan and craves for someone who could be his family removing the void his heart always carries. Two different backgrounds, yet same destination! When she is rather the silent and innocent one, he's the talkative and cheerful. He came into her life showing her a colourful life when she wanted to discover what life is outside the four walls she grew up.. While she came into his life when his heart wanted a person to assure that he isn't alone in his huge world. And WHEN THEY MET, there life's turned into something colourful !! ❤️ A simple emotion filled love story between the two when both of them where ready to fight every odd coming there way just to be together!

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
9
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

I was looking at her disappearing figure nervous to confess my true feelings for her.

0

I know it's high time I do this, but something in me isn't ready to take a rejection even when my heart feels that probably she too have the same feelings like I do.

0

I took a deep breath trying to relax my nerves and took long strides reaching her and held her wrist in my hand stopping her in mid way.

0

She looked back into my eyes and that mere eye contact had already sent goosebumps down my body that I din't know if I can really do this now.

0

"Vivaan?", She softly called out my name when I seem to be lost in her big black orbs

0

"Ah.. yeah.. I..", I tried to speak but looks like my vocals died within

0

"You wanna say something?", She asked completely facing me

0

I closed my eyes determined to tell it out whatever the consequences are, I opened my eyes and slowly took her other hand in mine while she looked at me shocked probably not understanding what I'm upto.

0

Do it Vivaan, you can do it!

0

"Manvi", I softly called out her name to which she nodded asking me to continue

0

"I.. I have something to tell you.. which I'm.. I'm feeling for quite a long time now", I said not meeting her eyes

0

"Vivaan, look into my eyes and speak.. what is it?", She asked and I could sence her curiosity

0

"I don't know how and when this happened but I have been strangely feeling good with you.. as in I don't know Manvi.. I'm just happy being next to you, your presence makes me happy..

0

With you, I don't feel I'm an orphan.. I feel as if I also have a family, like I have you with me.. I don't know what you feel about me but for me, whatever is between us is more than friendship Manvi.. it's definitely not just friendship for me.

0

I wanna have a future with you, I wanna marry you and have kids with you, I wanna grow old with you.. I Love You Manvi, I really do.. will you marry me?", I asked her finally when a smile lingered on my face all the time I spoke about her looking straight into her eyes

0

I was trying to read her face which was devoid of any expression and this moment I started to feel sweat beads forming on my forehead when I see her staring at me silently.

0

I don't know if what I did was right or no, or I don't know if I was too early to take this step.. but I felt I could no longer keep this pure emotion within me.

0

"Manvi", I softly called her

0

She slowly took her hands back from my hands that my heart started beating fast at the slightest possibility of getting rejected.

0

I'm not scared of rejections, but now if she say a no to me then I don't see a reason to live either.

0

In the few months we have known eachother she filled the void in my heart which always craved for a family ever since I know the world.. after giving my heart to her, after considering her as my only family and dreaming to build a family with her.. I could no longer resist if she doesn't feel the same for me.

0

Just don't say no Manvi.

0

"Vivaan", She called me softly looking aside

0

I took a deep breath and made her look at me with her chin.

0

"It's okay if it's a no Manvi, I can.. I can wait for you", I said when although I know it's not okay for me

0

"There's something you need to know about me Vivaan", She said and I wondered what could it be

0

✨✨

0

Manvitha Rathod, a 23 year old innocent who wants to live an independent life running away from all that which isn't letting her live the life she wished to. Stays with her only best friend away from her family.

0



0


Vivaan Mittal, a 27 year old young man who's currently working in a IT industry with his own hardwork being an orphan and craves for someone who could be his family removing the void his heart always carries.

0



0


Two different backgrounds, yet same destination!

0

When she's rather the silent and innocent one, he's the talkative and cheerful.

0

He came into her life showing her a colourful life when she wanted to discover what life is outside the four walls she grew up..

0

While she came into his life when his heart wanted a person to assure that he isn't alone in his huge world.

0

And WHEN THEY MET, there life's turned into something colourful !! ❤️

0

A simple emotion filled love story between the two when both of them where ready to fight every odd coming there way just to be together!

0

Next Chapter
Let The_dreamygirltales know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

1

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

1

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

PARIS IN THE DARK

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Read Now
Married by Fate

Bargara4670: This is a real feel-good love story. I enjoyed it very much. I'll certainly read more by this author.

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Read Now
The Cursed Alpha's Fifth Luna

Sami13579: Good plot interesting

Read Now
Light at the End of the Track

Sarah Widdecomb: I loved it. It’s very well written and kept me captivated while wondering what was going to happen next.

Read Now
The Heir's Shadow

lfayenrock: Great love sto. Enjoyed it very much and can’t wait to read more of your books

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

tatianne Ingrid: Adorei cada capitulo! parabens

Read Now
The zatorian

lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

Read Now
Shattered Steel

Ces: This was good! Short, but really good, and I absolutely devoured it. A fun, spicy read! 🌶️🔥I honestly think this story has so much potential to become a longer, more developed novel. Oliver's behavior and motivations are intriguing, and I'd love to explore his character more deeply and understand ...

Read Now