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Dream to become real event...

"I do not feel entitle to judge the grammar etc. I know a few languages, this is not my mother one, but it's pretty clear and understandable even in nuances so 5 stars from me. Well, sometimes you focus too much on sex only, instead of the plot (when and if there is a different one..., sometimes feels is not :P) but this story is a balsam for ordinary, hard working for life, honest people. Are you sure you are not some kind of elvish witch, capable of making it reality for a bunch of particular guys from USA, Russia and Israel? Plus some from other country too, let's not be xenophobic! The end like that would result in making one big, happy party for a most of the life here, Humans (those by big H, real ones), animals, elves, all nature spirits and all honorable creatures of this world."

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