What is your opinion?
Great we’d
"Really good story thankfully ghost was caught"
The bad boy
"Loved this book wouldnt change a thing would recommend to everyone that I know. I chose this rating because the book had my heart skip a beat a few times loved the way the author wrote and made it feel so real."
The Bad Boy
"This was quite an exhilarating love story!!! I enjoyed every word and chapter! Thank you for sharing your talent!!!"
jlbrown82
"I enjoyed this sweet love story. Good plot & character development. I look forward to reading more of your stories. "
The Bad Boy
"I really enjoyed it! "
The bad boy
"OMG!! I Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Book
"Really good book"
Great work
"Great news on your mouth for the rest kr you can ask for the rest kr you have to ward off bad omen and then 😀 😉 you a good portent for the rest 👍 you can answer questions by the time ⏲️ at "
Awesome story
"Can’t wait to read more. Please update soon "
🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻
"I just reaally loved it!!"
Great story
"Loved reading this. Some Grammer mistakes but didn't hinder reading too much. Great job author!!"
Avid reader
"Great book. Love the storyline. Just a few errors. "
The Bad Boy
"I loved this beautiful story. Really well written. I really enjoyed it. ❤️❤️❤️"
The Bad Boy
"Great story. So glad it was a happy ending"
Bad Boy
"Kept me interested "
Good story
"Good love story"
Lovable
"This book is exciting interesting and lovable I would recommend this book to anyone who loves reading romance novels too good "
Needs re-editing - grammatical errors are off putting
"Read 10 chapters and found it ok. The plot isn’t as bad as the editing skills. There are way too many reoccurring grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Sentence formation is bad - incomplete sentences, lack of comma/full stops and incorrect use of tenses are the biggest mistakes. The story also lacks creative flair. It’s written in spoken English. It needs to be thoroughly edited. The author also needs to add depth to characters. Descriptive writing is missing. I don’t know how the characters look like, how tall are they, what are their facial features, how is their office premise, etc. There are also no layers to their personalities. For instance, if Michael was bewitched by Rylie, what drew his interest in her. While reading, it felt that he was drawn to her because of her vulnerable state and physical features. But considering his occupation, he would have encountered several vulnerable victims who faced restraint or abuse in their lives. So, what pulled him to Rylie didn’t come out vividly. I have a feeling that English is not the author’s first language, maybe that’s why there are so many errors. I won’t be reading beyond 10 chapters as I miss the essence and creative writing. My suggestion to the author would be to get it edited properly. The book can be captivating but at this point, it looks like it’s a first-attempt copy. PS: I, in no way, intend to hurt the author’s feelings. This is an attempt to educate him/her about the flaws in the book so that the copy becomes crisper and reader-friendly. "
